Sunday, 8 March 2015

Boating with my grandad

Water
Shimmering in the light like a dancing fairy
Crayfish
As red as a sunset, slowly falling from its tough day
Diving
Plunging into the big ,freezing water. You feel as cold as an ice block.
Boating
Racing as fast as a jet, going a million miles an hour.

Ophelia Browne year 5 age 8                                            

1 comment:

  1. I love your story. I like the bit where you say 'water shimmering in the light like a dancing fairy', well done. I wish you luck for the rest of your stories and poems.

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